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on: April 20, 2020, 04:38:56 PM
Hey guys, just wanted to continue what we had going in the Discord. If you want to see a chapter continued, please post the link to the chapter here, and offer some detail on what you want to see, if applicable.
I don't know if anyone is still looking at this forum anymore, but I thought I'd offer...


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Reply #1 on: April 21, 2020, 09:47:41 AM
Ive liked the latest chapters. Nice job.

I got two suggestions:
- https://chyoa.com/story/Curse-of-the-Living-Clothes.25770 give the pantyhose a bit more personality. Maybe have them tease the guy who was a weakness for feet with the help of some more footwear
- https://chyoa.com/chapter/Dianne-tries-to-grasp-the-situation.563795 i'd like to see an alternative outcome where Denise actually manages to hide the magic from her mother but the enchantments make it a nightmare for her.

BTW there's a whole bunch of new chapters written by another user after this chapter https://chyoa.com/chapter/Nothing-appears-to-happen.478316 if you choose "Take the book and practice with some spells" unfortunately they're veeery short
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Reply #2 on: April 21, 2020, 09:33:58 PM
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- https://chyoa.com/story/Curse-of-the-Living-Clothes.25770 give the pantyhose a bit more personality. Maybe have them tease the guy who was a weakness for feet with the help of some more footwear

This first suggestion is just the origin chapter. Am I supposed to write a brand new thread there, or did you mean to link to one of the chapters within?

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- https://chyoa.com/chapter/Dianne-tries-to-grasp-the-situation.563795 i'd like to see an alternative outcome where Denise actually manages to hide the magic from her mother but the enchantments make it a nightmare for her.

On this one, Dianne is way too far in to have Denise hide anything from her. I'm guessing from what you're asking that you want me to continue from here instead [https://chyoa.com/chapter/Dirtier-Dancing.551094], but have things NOT specifically reveal themselves to Dianne?


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Reply #3 on: April 22, 2020, 05:21:13 PM
Guess youre right on the first one. I think i meant like continue the tease and go further.
As for the second one yeah i think from the previous one would work better.


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Reply #4 on: April 22, 2020, 06:30:47 PM
So on the second one, you want me to work on the new "magic book" thread I jumped off of, right?
Thanks for the clarifications, man! Glad you're still here. Will work on these soon!


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Reply #5 on: April 24, 2020, 11:53:41 AM
Slides under door
https://chyoa.com/chapter/Angela%2C-the-Leader-of-the-Coven.637497

Also I'm taking a look at some old drafts I found on CHYOA. Gonna see if I can polish them up.


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Reply #6 on: April 27, 2020, 10:40:34 AM
Additional pantyhose chapter posted:
https://chyoa.com/chapter/He-cast-the-spell-a-little-too-close-to-the-drawer.722036

Working on the Dianne chapter from Forbidden codex next.