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Title: I'm in love
Post by: TheLivingSocks on March 19, 2018, 10:08:08 AM
A scene needs to be written starring these beauties. I'm just not sure how to do it yet... (
Title: Re: I'm in love
Post by: TheCanadian on March 19, 2018, 07:39:43 PM
Socks that literally have their personality stitched into them, I love this.

Title: Re: I'm in love
Post by: Vestiphile on March 19, 2018, 07:44:19 PM
Title: Re: I'm in love
Post by: former182 on March 20, 2018, 06:33:48 PM
Heh., were there more people, I'd say have a contest to use those socks.

But I'll give it a shot if I can. I'll see if I can whip up a 1000 word story by friday.

At the moment, I'm thinking about writing a story where either the socks are a part of a security system or some teen either uses magic or a futuristic holodeck to have some fun with sentient socks.
Title: Re: I'm in love
Post by: former182 on March 23, 2018, 09:27:08 AM
Alright, here it is. Written in two days and under a stream of consciousness both times.

First time trying to write a 'bitchy' character. So I hope I did well.


In the distant future, a male teen was putting in the parental access code for his holodeck. His parents wouldn’t be back for a couple of weeks.

“C’mon… hope this works…” Alex muttered. His father thought using long repeating patterns was amusing. The confirmation noise beeped, making Alex give off a confident laugh. As he strode in, he said, “Now let’s begin…”

After the door closed, he began. “Computer, Location, Mall. Number of people besides myself…. Let’s say… Five hot women. The leader of them, give them a bit of a bitchy personality, but totally into me. As for the rest, surprise me. As for the scenario, let’s go with something akin to a low level porno story.”

“Or-Order acknowledged,” The computer said as it began to create the setting.

Alex gained a curious look when he heard the computer’s voice, but soon forgot when the checkerboard room was replaced with a generic mall from the late 20th century.

“And now for the babes,” Alex said as he rubbed his hands together. He evilly smiled as a pair of socks was formed… and frowned when nothing else happened. “Computer? What gives? Where’s the babes?”

He looked down at the socks. They were white. The socks had a pair of stripes near the top, with the number ‘69’ between the stripes. Under the stripes, was written ‘Fabulous Bitch’ and it was underlined.

“We’re here, hotstuff,” A pair of voices said.

“Oh… A prankster program… “ Alex grumbled. “And here I thought I put in the Parental access code… Guess Mom or dad thought ahead…”

“It’s not nice to ignore a pair of hot ladies right in front of you,” The voices said, right before one of the socks rose up and rubbed Alex’s crotch with the fall of its foot. “But  you’re cute and dumb, so I’m willing to forgive you a little.”

“So… Socks? My fantasy is limited to women’s socks?” Alex grumbled. “Com- AH!”

The sock rubbing him quickly pulled down his pants, wrapped around his dick, and squeezed. The voice said, “You aren’t leaving until I say so.”

“Compu-Comput-” Alex uttered before the other sock put its toes in his mouth.

“I want to go shopping,” The socks said.

Alex managed to remove the sock from his mouth and cried out, “Computer, end program!”

The socks dropped down from Alex and quietly uttered, “No.”

After a few moments of nothing happened, Alex was the one who said, “No… A holodeck malfunction…”

“”Well… I worried for nothing… I wonder… “ The socks said to themselves. “Computer, duplicate me three more times, but put us all under a hive mind.”

To Alex’s horror, three more pairs of the socks were created. He tried to take a step back, but two of the four pairs of socks wrapped around his arms and legs. A third pair took off his current socks before putting themselves on his feet.

“And now let’s go shopping,” The remaining socks said as the ones that had wrapped around his legs stopped holding him in place and went to give him a footjob.

“Computer, stop this! Computer, pause this!” Alex cried out.

“Sorry, sweetie, but it seems that the computer listens to me, as it should,” The socks said as they began to walk off towards a store. “So do the same. I want to go shopping.”

Alex stood still, glaring at the socks as he tried to ignore the footjob.

The walking socks stopps and spun around. “Alright, sweetie. I’ll give you to the count of three to do as I say.”

Alex cross his arms, trying to look tough.


A shiver of fear ran down his spine.


Now he began to shiver.


The socks giving him a footjob then stopped and squeezed, making him cry out in pain. He would have fallen over, but the socks around his wrists and feet held him up.

The walking socks waited until Alex yelled, “I give! I give!”

“So you’ll obey me?” The socks asked.

“Yes! Yes! Just stop hurting me!” Alex cried out. The socks on his crotch stopped squeezing, but did nothing else. “Can… Can I get some ice?”

“Ice is for good boys. Prove me to me that you are one,” The Socks answered as they turned around and began to head to a store.

Alex followed. The store was a clothing store. “Uhm… so what are we doing here?”

“Shopping, duh…” The socks answered.

“Excuse me for saying this, but you’re socks. What need for clothes do you have?” Alex asked as they walked in.

“Wow, you’re a genius! I never knew I was socks!” The Socks sarcastically answered. She then said in her normal tone, “Computer, change all the socks here into my kind of socks and put them under my control as well. But do not alter their size.”

With a wave, all the socks, regardless of what they had been, changed into the ‘Fabulous Bitch’.

“Alright… now what?” Alex asked as the socks walked off. One returned to give him a pair of shopping bags.

“We’re shopping, sweetie,” The socks said, her annoyed tone made Alex try to close his legs out of fear. “Aw… are you scared of little old me hurting you?”

“Kinda... “ Alex replied, trying to remain calm.

“I’ll only do it if you try to disobey me,” The socks said in a sugarly-sweet tone.

Never before did Alex want his parents to leave their vacation early and shut off the program. He’d accept any punishment. As the socks were looking over some skirts, he began to look around in a bit of boredom and fear.

He was shaken out of his mind-wandering when the socks asked,”Wow. You’ve been staring at that mannequin's tits for a few minutes now. Are you a boob man?”

“N-no!” Alex quickly said. When the socks on his crotch began to lightly squeeze his crotch, He pleaded, “Please don’t hurt me!”

The socks on his crotch began to give him a footjob again as the walking socks replied, “Hurt you? I’m going to see if I can turn you from a boob man into a sock man…”

“But you’ll hurt me if you can or if I lie?” Alex nervously asked.

“And he learns! We’ll have to get you a treat later!” The walking socks cooed.
Title: Re: I'm in love
Post by: misterdoe on March 23, 2018, 07:50:00 PM
Wow -- that was great! 👍
Title: Re: I'm in love
Post by: former182 on March 24, 2018, 12:44:32 AM
Thanks, misterdoe.

I still am... I guess slightly concerned that I may have not reached the right levels of bitchiness for the socks.

Then again, I'm never satisfied with my writings.

I chose the holodeck setting because I'm a bit tired from my usual magic settings.

I also will make a correction after I post this.

Changing 'To Alex’s horror, two more pairs of the socks were created' to 'To Alex’s horror, three more pairs of the socks were created'
Title: Re: I'm in love
Post by: TheLivingSocks on March 25, 2018, 03:57:21 AM
I'm working on a one-off story as a break from my 'Slave to Socks' story...will post it where when done.


It's a work in progress.
Title: Re: I'm in love
Post by: former182 on March 25, 2018, 10:32:47 AM
I like what you've written so far, TheLivingSocks!
Title: Re: I'm in love
Post by: InvisiLCfan on March 25, 2018, 01:19:38 PM
Nice! God your stories are so.....mmmm
*cold shower
Pls continue writing
Title: Re: I'm in love
Post by: TheLivingSocks on March 25, 2018, 08:57:47 PM
This song cover is so deliciously appropriate for all my stories:
Title: Re: I'm in love
Post by: TheCanadian on March 26, 2018, 01:32:22 AM
Former I love what you've written! It's a playful tier of bitchiness that fluctuates with how Alex acts, I kinda get the feeling the teasing bitchiness is helping Alex open up and get more calm about whats happening (at least that's the vibe I get).

A fun and playful story that I hope to see more of <3
Title: Re: I'm in love
Post by: former182 on March 28, 2018, 11:02:33 PM
Thanks for the complement, The Canadian!

Truth be told, I have no idea if I event want to continue the scene.

Part of me wants to leave it up for adoption, another part of me wants to put it up on my story at writing com.

I'll admit, if I did continue, I'd probably have the ending be one where Alex is freed from the holodeck, but discovers that he's more interested in a woman's socks than her body.