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Under Her Control
« on: November 26, 2014, 07:15:18 PM »
Another fairly old bit of writing. I had to split this piece into three sections before posting. It's all supposed to be the same story, but I couldn't get it flowing so I just wrote scenes whenever they popped into my head. Which is why unfortunately glossed over two parts at the end, but you still get the idea.

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“We’ve got a special treat for you all tonight!”

The Madam called out like a sales pitch to the crowd. She stood center stage putting on a little show of her own. Flinging her long dress hem to the side to reveal her shapely legs, she adjusted her stocking then slid her hands to her engorged bustline stuffed into a corset top. For an older woman, she was actually quite striking.

“I, Madam Scarlett, would like to present a new dancer!”

Backstage, Ovelia swallowed hard as she listened to the Mistress whip up the crowd.

***

The hoots and hollers fell silent for a moment as Ovelia’s legs took it upon themselves to saunter her out onto the stage with a risque gait she never knew they were capable of. She bit her lip and shut her eyes as she passed the pulled back curtain and into the lights.

Her arms dangled daintily at her sides while her hands flared out like a budding flower. Unable to move them of her own accord, they swung gently in unison with her commanding step that demanded all the attention the room had to offer. Once she she reached the middle of the stage, her body suddenly halted. Her right foot rose gingerly and turned her partially to the side as it clacked its boot heel down on the stage. The left did the same and soon faced her backside entirely to the audience.

Red rushed to the surface of her cheeks as she waited helplessly in worry of what was going to happen next.

In a slow fluid motion, her arms began to rise together out to her sides and continued until they reached high above her head. Ovelia’s right arm bent inward and its hand caressed the other down to the elbow. Her left quickly followed, mimicking the same movements. Both her hands ran across her arms then met behind her head where they slithered over her hair and hood. The cloaks hem in the back twirled around her long locks and fluttered upward, revealing her luscious rump her body so eagerly made her display.

With a firm shift, Ovelia’s butt whipped from one side to the other three complete times. Each shake jiggled her cheeks ever so slightly in their tight leather covering.

Her right arm then spun around and held itself out to her side while her left hand rested itself on her hip. The hand her arm outstretched began to grasp at the air, almost in a stroking motion as Ovelia started to slowly turn and look at the audience.

***

Scarlett smirked, feeling a rush of excitement surge through her that rivaled the pleasure of an orgasm.

Nothing was better than being in control. Being dominant.

Nothing.

She held out her hand, and gestured at Ovelia to come to her. Like a dog to its master, Scarlett knew well that even this lovely Ocreche--The White Raven herself--had no choice now but to heed her command.

“Come to me.”

The moment she heard the words, Ovelia felt her own body try desperately to betray her in a dutiful attempt to fulfill Scarlett’s bidding. She fought with every ounce of will she could muster against the overwhelming urge to obey the Mistress.

Gripping white-knuckled to the armrests of the chair, her hips began to shift from side to side, rubbing her butt on its cushion. Her toes wiggled in her boots, jittering her feet about. Soon they both lifted of their own volition and tried to get her up, scrapping their heels on the floor like they could simply drag Ovelia from the chair.

“Did you forget already that I demand you ANSWER me when I speak to you?”

Biting down on her lower lip hard enough to nearly draw blood, Ovelia couldn’t let herself speak the feverishly repeating phrase in her head that screamed to get out. Those words-- she utterly refused to say-- bobbed in her throat nonetheless. After a few seconds, she couldn’t hold her tongue any longer, and they came spilling from her lips.

“Y-Yes… my m-mistress.”

Scarlett folded her arms and laughed aloud, absolutely loving what she’d just heard.

Her cackle came to an abrupt end however, and she narrowed her icy gaze.  “I do so love it when my slaves resist me. But I’m not feeling very playful right now. So GET UP.”

The yell brought Ovelia to her feet immediately. It happened so fast, there was nothing she could do to prevent it. And as before, though perfectly clear this time, she heard herself answer to the command with a, “Yes my Mistress.”

“Now that’s better. You’re starting to listen.”

“Yes my Mistress.” Ovelia replied once again, nodding her head.

“No!” She spat, shaking her head and gritting her teeth. “Dammit, I’m not your puppet!”

Scarlett scoffed. “Oh no, certainly not. You’re more like a pet, totally obedient and loyal. And pets don’t wear such nice clothes, in fact, they wear nothing at all. So take them off.”

Giving the same reply, Ovelia couldn’t help but do as she was told.

(Ovelia strips naked.)

“Wonderful, now, I wish to wear them, and I want you to dress me in them.”

(Ovelia dresses Scarlett in her garments.)

Turning to the mirror, Scarlett walked closer and checked herself out from every angle.

“These look wonderful on me, don’t you think?”

Ovelia stood naked behind her, watching Scarlett ogle herself in her clothes.

“Yes my Mistress, you look amazing in them. I want you to keep them, they look much better on you.”

Ovelia quickly covered her mouth once she was finished.

“Well thank you. I do.” Scarlett chuckled, swaying the cloak to the side and slapping her butt in the tight leather.

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Re: Under Her Control
« Reply #1 on: November 26, 2014, 07:35:03 PM »
Oh, I see you do the same thing I do. Put in simple directions in parentheses as a placeholder for you to come back to later and wrote some proper prose.  ;D

That second part is the hottest. It's not bad enough she's being controlled, they're controlling her body even better than she could control it herself if she had been able to. So deft, adroit and seductively. Her body making gentle and nuanced moves on its own and looking for all the world as if she were doing it all on her own.

Mmmngh, very good!
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« Reply #2 on: November 26, 2014, 07:38:52 PM »
Thanks so much! I tried really hard to make that part sexy. Wasn't easy I'll tell you xD

And yeah, the placeholders work really well! I wanted to keep moving and for some reason the dressing and undressing just made me stumble.

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« Reply #3 on: November 26, 2014, 07:46:11 PM »
I know what you mean. When RPing, I ended up posing so many damned times Katrice being made to take her clothes off. There's a story in there maybe, explaining why she finally decided to never wear clothing again.  ;D
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« Reply #4 on: November 26, 2014, 07:57:00 PM »
Well I don't necessarily have a problem with writing that sort of thing. In fact, her stripping would be really hot to me xD But to be honest, I actually tend to prefer scantily clad to naked. Not that naked is bad, but I like at least some clothing at least. And I really love Ovelia's outfit. It's pretty much the epitome of everything I like. I've spent a long, LONG time designing it. I wish I could find a better image host or something so I could show her and it off a little more. You don't get much of an idea for what it looks like or even what it all is in the pieces I've posted.

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« Reply #5 on: November 26, 2014, 08:03:20 PM »
We need a proper picture of Ovelia.

We need a proper picture of Ovelia in her hot oufit.

Maybe later we could have a picture of Ovelia and Katrice together in some way.  ;)
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« Reply #6 on: November 26, 2014, 08:18:38 PM »
We need a proper picture of Ovelia.

We need a proper picture of Ovelia in her hot oufit.

Maybe later we could have a picture of Ovelia and Katrice together in some way.  ;)

Well, if you have an email or anything, I could just send you some pictures. I don't have many finished ones of her, a lot of conceptual work but its still really neat! And those two together would be awesome! I think it would be really fun making something together with them. Maybe we could write something together sometime using them? Sorry, probably getting ahead of myself! It's just so cool to have someone else to talk with about creative stuff! :D

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« Reply #7 on: November 26, 2014, 08:24:48 PM »
magickalslave at earthlink dot net  ;D

And I think I'd love to collaborate on a story with Ovelia and Katrice together somehow.
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« Reply #8 on: November 26, 2014, 08:29:21 PM »
magickalslave at earthlink dot net  ;D

And I think I'd love to collaborate on a story with Ovelia and Katrice together somehow.

Awesome! :) I'll get some drawings together and send them over! I've got a lot more writings too I can post for you to read. Some might be really long to have up on the forum. Have you ever used Google Drive? I could just link you to them and if we want to write together we can both use the same document at the same time on it!

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« Reply #9 on: November 26, 2014, 08:41:31 PM »
magickalslave at earthlink dot net  ;D

And I think I'd love to collaborate on a story with Ovelia and Katrice together somehow.

Awesome! :) I'll get some drawings together and send them over! I've got a lot more writings too I can post for you to read. Some might be really long to have up on the forum. Have you ever used Google Drive? I could just link you to them and if we want to write together we can both use the same document at the same time on it!

I have not used Google Drive, though since I have G+ account then I suppose I could try it. I got turned off on G+ very early on with that whole "real names" thing. And then a Google admin started harassing me over it.

I have a Dropbox as well!
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« Reply #10 on: November 26, 2014, 08:53:25 PM »
magickalslave at earthlink dot net  ;D

And I think I'd love to collaborate on a story with Ovelia and Katrice together somehow.

Awesome! :) I'll get some drawings together and send them over! I've got a lot more writings too I can post for you to read. Some might be really long to have up on the forum. Have you ever used Google Drive? I could just link you to them and if we want to write together we can both use the same document at the same time on it!

I have not used Google Drive, though since I have G+ account then I suppose I could try it. I got turned off on G+ very early on with that whole "real names" thing. And then a Google admin started harassing me over it.

I have a Dropbox as well!

I sent you an email of drawings!

Well, whatever you think we could try. I just figured Drive is pretty good for writing documents. At least I like it. We'd be able to edit and write in real time too. I'm not sure what other programs do that. Or we could just trade off documents.

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« Reply #11 on: November 26, 2014, 08:58:39 PM »
I sent you an email of drawings!

Well, whatever you think we could try. I just figured Drive is pretty good for writing documents. At least I like it. We'd be able to edit and write in real time too. I'm not sure what other programs do that. Or we could just trade off documents.

Yay!!

I'm actually still at work right now, haha. So I won't be able to check that e-mail until I get back home!
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« Reply #12 on: November 26, 2014, 09:01:07 PM »
I sent you an email of drawings!

Well, whatever you think we could try. I just figured Drive is pretty good for writing documents. At least I like it. We'd be able to edit and write in real time too. I'm not sure what other programs do that. Or we could just trade off documents.

Yay!!

I'm actually still at work right now, haha. So I won't be able to check that e-mail until I get back home!

Oh! I'm sorry! I hope I haven't been pestering you while you're trying to work! We've been messaging back and forth for like an hour or so now.

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« Reply #13 on: November 26, 2014, 09:16:36 PM »
Oh! I'm sorry! I hope I haven't been pestering you while you're trying to work! We've been messaging back and forth for like an hour or so now.

Gods, not at all! Talking about magickal body control and kinky, mischievous faeries is a lot more engaging!

I just need to make sure I keep this tab hidden...  :-X
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« Reply #14 on: November 26, 2014, 09:33:46 PM »
Haha xD fair enough. I used to doodle at work, occasionally delving into more perverse things as I did, so I know all about hiding stuff at times like that!

Oh, I know, right? It's so rare now when I get a chance to talk about this sort of thing with somebody who actively creates on their own too. It's quite fulfilling! I gotta show you some more sequences and stuff I drew where Ovelia gets body controlled or possessed. I've got plenty of stuff where her suit gets taken over or controlled too. But whenever I do possession, I rarely take consciousness away from the possessed. It ruins all the fun :) They're quite old, like those are breaching into the 10 years old range of my archive, but still quite entertaining.