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It's looking pretty solid, what's missing?


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I dunno. It's been awhile since I've actually completed a chapter.


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I love it, Former!
I'd say it's great to go as is, but do you mind if I elaborate on the ladies a bit? :D


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Feel free to. I did give you permission to edit the chapter.


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Former, help me out--the link at the top is actually from a chapter that's already filled...what's this meant to link to?


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Ah, my bad.

the choice that this chapter would be is 'FC - you were swarmed by sexually aggressive underwear.'


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Gotcha! Ignore my email then--though I bet I'd be able to bug you to write even more if you were on IM. XD


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So anyone got any chapters in the works they want help/opinions on? I'd love to help :D


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I added a bit to this already awesome post by Former182:
http://magicmystique.com/mmstories/index.php?title=FC_-_you_were_swarmed_by_sexually_aggressive_underwear

(remember, for context you only need to hit the "what links here" button on the left. It will show you the next chapter up in the chain. I'm working on a way to seed the chains visually, but I haven't figured it out yet.)


Since I posted from my account, I made sure to credit you, Former. Thanks for your patience!


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You know--honestly, no one needs to see the wiki articles before posting--the nature of the wiki is that its infinitely editable. If you're worried about making a mistake, it can always be fixed later! (Having said that--anyone who still wants another pair of eyes on a new chapter is totally free to keep pre-posting here--I'm happy to do it if you don't need a lightning quick turnaround.

On that note, is there anyone who wishes to post in the interactive who's not able to? Speak up and I'll augment your rights!


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Alright, I put up a chapter, though I might have made Denise into a bit of a antagonist way too early.