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Re: Review my upcoming (and perhaps other people's) chapters for the MMWiki
« Reply #15 on: December 22, 2014, 08:53:04 AM »
Former, these are great! If you don't have them posted by this evening, I'll take a closer look and get them up tonight, if you like.

I was posting a lot of stuff to the interactive yesterday, which I hope to continue today after work--it's another major thread from your writing.com interactive that I shortened as "Forbidden Codex D" (Forbidden Codex w/ Denise) on the story root.

Talk to you soon...

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Re: Review my upcoming (and perhaps other people's) chapters for the MMWiki
« Reply #16 on: December 22, 2014, 09:04:37 AM »
Thanks, Vestiphile. I'm planning on posting the chapters up by Saturday. So if you want me to give you access to edit the chapters, let me know and I'll give you the permission to do so.

I read the Forbidden codex/D chapters. I'm tempted to give Denise a sister who likes cosplay.

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Re: Review my upcoming (and perhaps other people's) chapters for the MMWiki
« Reply #17 on: December 22, 2014, 06:21:23 PM »
SÚsame, ouvre-toi

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Re: Review my upcoming (and perhaps other people's) chapters for the MMWiki
« Reply #18 on: December 22, 2014, 09:38:47 PM »
Permission granted.

A small note: The misspellings in the woman's voice is my attempt at giving her an accent. Leave them in if you can, remove them if they are too distracting.

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Re: Review my upcoming (and perhaps other people's) chapters for the MMWiki
« Reply #19 on: December 26, 2014, 09:27:06 PM »
making a few augmentations, but haven't seen you around. Hope I'm not doing too much--but you can always revert.

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Re: Review my upcoming (and perhaps other people's) chapters for the MMWiki
« Reply #20 on: December 27, 2014, 01:57:49 AM »
I like what you've done with the chapters. I'll try to post more often, now that the busy part of the year is over with.

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Re: Review my upcoming (and perhaps other people's) chapters for the MMWiki
« Reply #21 on: December 27, 2014, 09:39:53 AM »
Awesome! I need to get into a few things too--I gotta remember these don't take too long to put together.
I'm finished with both of your new chaps. (See 'makeup', which I added much to.) Post at will.

Thanks for letting me help!

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Re: Review my upcoming (and perhaps other people's) chapters for the MMWiki
« Reply #22 on: December 27, 2014, 02:50:08 PM »
Thank you for being a big help!

Chapters are up on the Wiki.

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Re: Review my upcoming (and perhaps other people's) chapters for the MMWiki
« Reply #23 on: December 28, 2014, 01:16:53 AM »
That feeling when the chapter options you hopped would get written gets written :3

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Re: Review my upcoming (and perhaps other people's) chapters for the MMWiki
« Reply #24 on: January 05, 2015, 12:13:28 AM »
I apologize for not posting anything as of late, but I was sick since X-mas. I'm healthy now, so I'll write some chapters over the week. Links to them on GDoc will be put here when they are done and then they'll be posted next week Saturday on the wiki.

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Re: Review my upcoming (and perhaps other people's) chapters for the MMWiki
« Reply #25 on: January 05, 2015, 11:09:31 PM »
That feeling when the chapter options you hopped would get written gets written :3
Were you hopping on one foot, or both?  ;)

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Re: Review my upcoming (and perhaps other people's) chapters for the MMWiki
« Reply #26 on: January 07, 2015, 08:26:45 AM »
Liking the "travis wins?" you shared, but I think more details from the clerks in a more organic way (as opposed to stat lists) could flow better. Can I play in there?

(Totally let me know if I'm insinuating myself into these too much--there's room for everyone to play at the wiki, so I don't want to step on your toes if that's the case!)

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Re: Review my upcoming (and perhaps other people's) chapters for the MMWiki
« Reply #27 on: January 07, 2015, 10:53:44 AM »
Go ahead ad edit to your heart's delight. I don't mind because I trust you.

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Re: Review my upcoming (and perhaps other people's) chapters for the MMWiki
« Reply #28 on: January 26, 2015, 11:56:01 PM »
Sorry about not posting more. RL events got in the way.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1M1wFv9FhyGyb6gVdIEjcHkSMPysBoX9dHgQScWhKqW4/edit?usp=sharing

Chapter's unfinished, as it's under 300 words. Looking for suggestions about what clothing the outfit should talk about. Kinda want it to talk about spandex and/or latex. Also need to think up a name for the Outfit while she's on camera.

Also probably need to come up with a better description for the pose on the bed. Supposed to be a 'come hither' sexy pose, but I think I didn't do a good job

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Re: Review my upcoming (and perhaps other people's) chapters for the MMWiki
« Reply #29 on: February 24, 2015, 01:08:23 AM »
Getting back into the swing of things now that everything seems to quiet down around here.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xz2ZjyBzOi2McwWK0wfJyLmjdi3PYflsfnpXJPnOvds/edit?usp=sharing