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Katrice Metaluna

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A summoning orb...
« on: October 14, 2014, 04:52:45 AM »
Katrice was a bit surprised to see a white glowing orb float into her bedroom. She blinked and rubbed her eyes to make sure she wasn’t seeing things, but it was still there when she opened her eyes again. Gently it floated over from the door and came right up to her. It gently moved up and down before her for a little bit, and all she could do was stare at it dumbly. What was this thing?

A moment later, and it started to move away from her. But as it did, Katrice felt her legs move. She was made to up off her bed, and her feet were made to carry her in the direction the orb was going. Her legs and feet moved with a soft and gentle grace; ghostly steps almost as quiet as the orb itself. It had taken control of her legs and feet and it was making her follow it to… wherever she was being summoned, apparently.

While she was certainly somewhat concerned about just who it was that had sent this orb over to fetch her, she couldn’t help but feel just a little giddy by the way it was controlling her lower half. She kept trying to reassert control over her legs and feet, just so she could get a minor thrill out of the sensation of them completely ignoring her will and moving the way the orb was making them.
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Re: A summoning orb...
« Reply #1 on: November 26, 2014, 05:46:58 PM »
Did you by chance ever write any more to this scene? It's an awesome start. As with the other pieces I really like how you describe the body control Katrice is facing.

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Re: A summoning orb...
« Reply #2 on: November 26, 2014, 06:09:37 PM »
I have not, no. This bit just came to me spontaneously. So as of yet, it's not really attached to anything else. I imagine that she's being summoned this way for some very big and/or important thing. One that she wasn't warned about beforehand. Possibly some official trial or ceremony!
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Re: A summoning orb...
« Reply #3 on: November 26, 2014, 06:28:26 PM »
Well whatever its for, I like how you decided to go about it. The orb and everything just seems unique to me. The whole scene comes off as quite arousing with how Katrice is basically blindsided by this in her own room. It doesn't help that she's gets a kick out of it near the end :b

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Re: A summoning orb...
« Reply #4 on: November 26, 2014, 07:23:58 PM »
Thank you! ^_^

I'd kinda seen that with most magickally inclined masters, they usually summon their pets and servants to them via teleportation, and sometimes telekinesis. I decided a long time ago that Endora's favored way of summoning her charges to her was to remotely take control of their legs and feet and make them walk from wherever they happened to be to wherever she happened to be!

You can imagine Katrice having a pleasant chat with someone out in the town square or some such place. Then suddenly she stands up and starts walking away, and she gets a surprised look on her face for it. "Oh gosh," she'd say, "I think Miss Endora wants me!" She'd blush while trying to make some polite farewells, while her feet were earnestly carrying her away without any sort of hesitation!

So you can see that by summoning her with an orb like this, that must mean that wherever she is being made to go, it must be for something really really important.
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Re: A summoning orb...
« Reply #5 on: November 26, 2014, 08:26:23 PM »
Now that would be a great scene! Especially with how well you portray emotion and expression. I don't think I'd be able to handle all the awkward moments all the time though if I were her xD