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Chapter 12?
« on: April 27, 2018, 04:07:27 AM »
Submitted for the chopping block. https://docs.google.com/document/d/15s2p2Iztylo9Pr4Dn0dDoxbUTMwLGjvR-Ccf3q1lRz0/edit?usp=sharing

Rip and Tear away. Let it be known that I, the writer, am lesbian. So if the interaction with the male character is shit...that's why....I'm a writing a scene in which I have no experience to draw from. Constructive criticism is welcome, especially since Chapter 13 will get in to the brunt of the sexual assault on Robert.

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Re: Chapter 12?
« Reply #1 on: May 03, 2018, 01:06:58 AM »
You softened pretty quickly to having male characters in your writing.
I thought I remembered your first postings here saying we weren't ever going to see any.

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Re: Chapter 12?
« Reply #2 on: May 08, 2018, 03:56:17 AM »
I read as many posts as I could find that I made, and while I have said numerous times that it is highly unlikely that I would ever write about a man, I never said I wouldn't. I also found some posts regarding about how I wouldn't do it mostly because of my inexperience in how to go about it, as evidenced in the chapter.

If there are no edits, you can just copy and past that to add to the chapters on your site.