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I could use some help.
« on: June 22, 2017, 01:42:09 PM »
I have a friend who sometimes likes to draw body control stuffs. He really likes Katrice and most of the things she gets herself into. He's even made a few fan drawings of her.

Anyways, earlier this year he asked if I could write a little story for him starring Katrice and his bunny-witch character Zamantha, based on the Disney cartoon "Trick or Treat for Halloween". I'm sure you've all seen that, right? The one where Witch Hazel takes control of Donald's feet with a "magic shower"? LOL

Well, for the past several months I've been trying and failing to get this story done right. Everything I've come up with so far has been, well... not right. Like, I can't get it to gel. It's supposed to be silly and funny but everything I've tried so far has just fallen flat. It's very frustrating. :P

I was hoping to get a little outside inspiration if any of you could throw some ideas at me. I wouldn't care how dumb they might sound. Just post 'em here if you got some? Please please pleeeeease?

The requirements for this story aren't too much, but they are necessary. These are:
1. It has to stay as close to the plot of the cartoon as possible, with regards to Katrice and Zamantha's roles. (no plucky nephews!)
2. At the same time, Katrice and Zamantha should keep true to their character as much as possible.
3. The story must occur on Halloween night (dur).
3. BONUS: If a reason can be found to have Katrice in a ridiculous sailor's costume then that would be icing on the cake (particularly if it's bottomless :P)

Deviation from the original story is OK if it would make things more interesting, engaging and/or funny. A heavier focus on the body control aspects of it are fine too! I'd like to avoid cartoon logic tho, in favor of a more whimsical Alice in Wonderland style.

I'm determined to get this thing done for him even if it kills me. Since no actual faeries has ever approached me to waft some inspiration into my mind, I'm left with asking all of you. No pressure tho. Nope! But as an incentive, I promise to post the resulting story here once I've finished it, so that you might also get to enjoy it. <3

And thank you!  ;D
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Re: I could use some help.
« Reply #1 on: June 22, 2017, 06:43:01 PM »

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« Reply #2 on: June 22, 2017, 07:15:06 PM »

Did I ever show you this?


https://clips4sale.com/studio/36032/13169058/Ludella%27s+Bewitched+Booty+-+MP4+HD+1280x720


Otherwise I will think on it.

No you didn't. But someone else did. I actually bought that clip a couple months ago just to see it. It was merely OK. Too much emphasis on butts for my tastes. ;P
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« Reply #3 on: June 22, 2017, 07:20:23 PM »
I concur. Still, thought you'd like to see it.

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« Reply #4 on: June 22, 2017, 07:32:26 PM »
I concur. Still, thought you'd like to see it.

I might be judging that clip too harshly. It said right there when I got it that it was a special commission that someone asked for. So rightly it's tailored for whatever tastes they had so for that person I'm quite sure it was pretty awesome, lol.
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« Reply #5 on: June 22, 2017, 08:07:28 PM »
You're not bashing the production values or anything, you're just saying it isn't to your taste :)

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« Reply #6 on: June 22, 2017, 08:07:53 PM »
You have any details on Z?

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« Reply #7 on: June 22, 2017, 08:20:16 PM »
You have any details on Z?

There's two drawings of her that you can see on FA without needing an account. One of them has Katrice in it. ;P

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/21461630/

http://www.furaffinity.net/view/21671169/

From what I know about her, she's a bit nuts and not very formal at all. And she is short. She wears sneakers. As far a demeanor goes, I always got a kind of a Witchie-Poo vibe from her, ROTFL. In another drawing you can't see, it kind of insinuates that among the shenanigans she likes to get into, one of them is to cast spells on people's legs and feet. To make them dance or follow her around. Or make someone march around in public while naked. :P

That second picture here though. You can see that at some point she did something like that to Katrice. And now Katrice is very nervously admitting that she kinda liked it and asking if Zamantha could do it again. lol
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« Reply #8 on: June 22, 2017, 08:31:31 PM »
Hello Katrice,

How I can encoraged you to write this story?

My fetish orentation is Body control in particular "feet control fetish", this short of Disney represent for me the beginning and the center of my fetish.

I wanted to write a similar story inspired on this Disney short, but unlike you based on human character like a bratty girl. However my lack in English do not allowed me to write it fast and furthermore I'm so busy.

About the inspiration thath you need, you should focus on your personal aspects. for example: I love the humor style of that cartoonish humor behind thi short, especially when Witch Hazel makes donald's feet dance ridicolously by using a square dance song plays with banjo. I like Her magic shower sprayed several time on his feet or I like how Donald's feet bouncing and move to music.

most important things: cartoonish humor and description movement of the bewitched feet.

elements that shouldn't miss for me: music song in rhyme, magic elements, espression face description.

let me know if I can help you.

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« Reply #9 on: June 22, 2017, 08:33:34 PM »

Hey! Glad to see you joined us. We have options available for you to load your art up, and no one will give you grief for it.


As for your English, it's good enough that I could clean it up and make it read well if you want.

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« Reply #10 on: June 22, 2017, 08:46:09 PM »
About the inspiration thath you need, you should focus on your personal aspects. for example: I love the humor style of that cartoonish humor behind thi short, especially when Witch Hazel makes donald's feet dance ridicolously by using a square dance song plays with banjo. I like Her magic shower sprayed several time on his feet or I like how Donald's feet bouncing and move to music.

most important things: cartoonish humor and description movement of the bewitched feet.

elements that shouldn't miss for me: music song in rhyme, magic elements, espression face description.

let me know if I can help you.

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This does help quite a bit. I'd been vacillating between Zamantha doing the banjo bit or not. But you're right, that would totally be in character for her. Calling out the dance and then Katrice's feet doing that dance entirely without her. That alone is quite humiliating!

I'm just... I can't figure out just what sorta thing Katrice would actually do that would bring down Zamantha's whimsical wrath upon her. And Katrice actually gets excited and aroused when she loses control of herself. It's just that she really really never wants to admit that! But that cat might be out of the proverbial bag as far as Zamantha goes. I've kinda imagined then that Zamantha would be verbally teasing Katrice the entire time she was making her do silly things.
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« Reply #11 on: June 22, 2017, 09:10:22 PM »

1) Can you reload the hidden pic here so we can see?


2) Z seems like the type to pick on someone because they have no candy for Halloween as a harmless prank.

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« Reply #12 on: June 22, 2017, 10:59:59 PM »
1) Can you reload the hidden pic here so we can see?

I'd rather not do that without the artist's permission. I didn't feel like dragging him into this.

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2) Z seems like the type to pick on someone because they have no candy for Halloween as a harmless prank.

That could be a way to go. Especially 'cause I really don't see Katrice trying to be a jerk about that sorta thing.
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« Reply #13 on: June 22, 2017, 11:36:00 PM »
He asked you to write a story for him, right? Just ask him if you can share some extra material with some folks helping you put metaphorical pen to metaphorical paper. :)

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« Reply #14 on: June 22, 2017, 11:40:11 PM »
He asked you to write a story for him, right? Just ask him if you can share some extra material with some folks helping you put metaphorical pen to metaphorical paper. :)

*Sigh* Fiiiiiiiiine. It's just I didn't want him knowing I've reached out for help.  :-X
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