Story in progress

[misterdoe]

I'm finally getting ready to post something on my site! 😁 But first, I wanted to get some feedback from you guys. The story's on my Google Drive at the moment. Here's the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OCi2AviMqqmvOP-dbuySGlfvwJMoQQlr9HvF2DkWxWE/edit?usp=drivesdk

Comments welcome, either here or on Drive. ☺

* Bryan *
posted from my tablet

[Vestiphile]

I'm glad you're finally going to post this one!
I thought I was gonna see something brandy-brand new, though... :|