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General Writing Forum / Re: Resurrected A.CF content
« on: July 11, 2018, 01:37:41 AM »
I have everything.

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General Writing Forum / Re: Resurrected A.CF content
« on: July 09, 2018, 09:23:06 AM »
I did the better share of the writing on Lofty Enchantments. I have it all.
I guess I can put it back up. It's basically non-canon pre-AoE now.

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General Art / Re: Illustration Stream
« on: June 26, 2018, 09:56:10 PM »
Streaming Tuesday, 10PM:
https://picarto.tv/Vestiphile

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General Art / Re: Illustration Stream
« on: June 19, 2018, 10:19:29 PM »

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General Writing Forum / Re: New story
« on: June 17, 2018, 02:43:23 PM »
I don't really have any notes. We should post this to the site. :o

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General Writing Forum / Re: New story
« on: June 16, 2018, 12:36:12 PM »
That's pretty fucking hot, dude!

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General Writing Forum / Re: Let's Try This Again
« on: June 12, 2018, 07:35:55 PM »
Hey gang,

Feel free to provide feedback here if you're a reader. Just because they aren't on my site doesn't mean you can't talk about them. :D
I'm sure other prospective paying customers would appreciate the feedback, and I'm sure JJ would too.

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General Discussion / Re: Off-Site Archival thread
« on: June 06, 2018, 06:56:12 PM »
If the producers actually show a talking vagina in this film, I retract everything. :P

But I don't think they have the balls. Pun extremely intended.

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General Discussion / Re: Off-Site Archival thread
« on: June 05, 2018, 07:17:13 PM »
Good god, I'm betting any and every line from this innovative work of art has enough politically-charged tripe to reduce my interest to less than zero.
You're not going to leave the film with a boner. You're going to leave with tea-shades and a copy of Marx-Engels. :D

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General Discussion / Re: Off-Site Archival thread
« on: May 31, 2018, 06:51:38 PM »
you totally do. I'll shoot you a hangouts message to remind you of the email.

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General Discussion / Re: Off-Site Archival thread
« on: May 31, 2018, 08:28:23 AM »
Dude, GOGOGO on literotica!

Didn't these guys reject your third chapter, originally?
Looks like they're eating it up now!

I'm swapping servers this weekend; this place is getting the boost it needs to motivate me to modernize it.
Shoot me your work again--possibly on google drive if you have it all there? I'll get it posted before the weekend.

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General Discussion / Re: Off-Site Archival thread
« on: May 25, 2018, 06:13:26 AM »
You know what, I think I've had these. Apologies for not posting them earlier.

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Updates / Odd schedule until Memorial Day
« on: May 09, 2018, 08:41:55 PM »
Hey gang. They have me at a training module at work that lasts three weeks and runs the night shift. This means that I will be streaming at some weird times right up until about Memorial Day. I owe a lot of things and I can only promise you that I've been working on a lot of things in the background.
Many of you have rec'd full-size drawings of your requests, but the smaller sizes have not yet been posted to dA. I will work on getting the public posts caught up to your receipts this weekend.
More information later this morning. I will be streaming at 5AM EDT.

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Edit Hell / Re: Chapter 12?
« on: May 03, 2018, 01:06:58 AM »
You softened pretty quickly to having male characters in your writing.
I thought I remembered your first postings here saying we weren't ever going to see any.

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General Writing Forum / Re: In a writing funk
« on: April 20, 2018, 01:41:15 PM »
Start something else. Let it become something.

If it's about socks, elements of it are going to be repetitive. Mainly the socks coming to life. XD

I have the same issue with my LC stuff, but consider the following:

COUTURE CAPTURE has a lot of clothes sex.
But COUTURE CAPTURE is about...finding one's true love and revealing your WHOLE self to them, after a series of trust thresholds are passed in a given relationship. Sometimes outside circumstances force you to pass through those trust thresholds, like Derek.

SADIE AND MADDIE has a lot of clothes sex.
SADIE and MADDIE is about...Coming of age and having your life turned upside down when you just begin to understand your position in the world, shouldering the responsibilities of fantastic power, learning to fight when you have to...

HOUSEHOLD MAGIC has a lot of clothes sex.
HOUSEHOLD MAGIC is about...kind of a mixed message. One party seems to experience the repercussions of messing with powers one doesn't understand, while another party seems to begin her mastery of great power by the act of self exploration.

Are any of them masterpieces? I dunno. Not up to me. Statistically, not likely.
But are they different stories? Sure. Absolutely.

The fetish fuel is similar, and it's a critical part of the story...but does it drive the story?
I'd argue: not essentially.

So it's okay it aspects of your stuff seem the same, I'd say--if you care/make us care about the characters behind the sockfuckin'. Which, I'd say you did in your first try pretty well.

Worth Adding:

I abhor DARK MISTRESS as a whole. There are scenes I adore, and some really strong moments--but it reads like it was passed to another author twice. Sometimes you're not going to like the things you've completed. Sometimes you're going to feel this way before you've completed them.
Start something else. Let A SLAVE TO SOCKS sit for a while if need be. If the dam breaks, and you know what you want for the character at the end, define it for yourself, and then lead her there. If the socks are more the character--figure out what you want for THEM and lead them there.
If you don't know what they want, or what you want for them, hold up until you do. You might not ever know.

As long as you're in another universe building--that's fine. It happens.

ADRIKSEHN:SKIPPER was originally meant to be a sci-fi one off based on a dimension where the Villainess from DARK MISTRESS wins. I wanted to play with a place where things ruling humans is the rule, and cheating Nyxe's win was the best way to do it.
I ended up liking the character so much that I built a story for him--a background and a career.
I gave the multiverse a name, and eventually a structure.
Suddenly, what started as an excuse to play with ALL THE LC became the source of a whole multiverse...and LC ended up being an incidental part of the Adriksehn story.

So in some sense, it's okay to be repetitive. A SLAVE TO SOCKS is good. We like it.
Give yourself some time to play in another space and see what comes of it.

Make room. Try something out-there.

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